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First Chapters Diagnostic (First Three Chapters - Maximum 7500 Words)

$149.00 $179.00
Limited Availability

Find out if your story is going to work the way you expect it to.

  • Does the opening create tension?

  • Does the protagonist’s goal and motivation make sense?

  • Are the stakes clear?

  • Is the pacing dragging?

  • Would an agent or reader keep going?

Find out if your story is going to work the way you expect it to.

  • Does the opening create tension?

  • Does the protagonist’s goal and motivation make sense?

  • Are the stakes clear?

  • Is the pacing dragging?

  • Would an agent or reader keep going?

How it Works:

Purchase your slot.

  1. Within 24 hours, you’ll receive an email, which will contain an intake form. Please download and fill out the intake form, and attach both the completed form and your first 5,000–7,500 words as a response to the original intake form email. (By using the same email instead of an online form, and keeping everything in one email thread, I hope there will be less chance of confusion, missed messages, etc.)

  2. You’ll receive your personalized feedback within 7-10 business days.

  3. If you have immediate questions or concerns, please email me at jillshearer@creativewords.me